My twilight fan Fiction ( Untitled)

Prologue: Bella

We were hunting, Alice, Edward, and I; today there was a herd of elk a few miles south from the house. As we ran through the forest, we smelled an irresistible, sweet odor; a human. Simultaneously, we stopped breathing. Alice then said through her teeth “ I’m sorry, I’m so thirsty!” she ran the other way, and we turned to follow. Then Edward said “ Wait!” I stared at him incredulously. “ Look.” Was all he said. There, in front of us, was a human girl, blood pouring from a stab wound in her chest. She was almost unconscious, but she was alive. I didn’t know if I could resist, and I was breaking, but Edward was frozen there, his expression unfathomable. “Edward?” I asked uncertainly. “Go, Bella.” He whispered, but I stood there, uncomprehending. Then, as I stared in amazement, he bit her.

“Edward, NO!” I screamed. “ It’s alright Bella.” He said, and he had, indeed, stopped. On the ground in front of us, she screamed. In one swift movement, he had her in his arms. “ Lets go!” he muttered, he wasn’t breathing. The girl screamed again.


Chapter one: Rowena

I don’t remember much of my life as a human. Only that somebody killed me. I don’t know why, or, at least, I don’t remember. I do remember the beautiful, pale man who saved me. He and his mate found me in the woods. They resisted the smell of my blood, though it was a huge temptation I also remember the fire that was the pain of my transformation. He bit me, and the fire started, it was almost worse than the cold that death was bringing. He carried me in his cool arms to his house, where I screamed for three days straight. Then I woke up.

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that's scary woman!

lol! alot of my writing is sorta scary! did you like it?

Don't know about him, but i liked it!